LES MORTS.
by
Oyinkan Adeshoye.
{OK, before I get a lot of criticism for this being awkwardly shit.. It's okay. This is just a draft. Criticize away!
FADE IN: into The bar, Conor, Georgina, Jordan & Friends sitting down, drinking, smoking and talking.
Music gets played.
[Newspaper girl (Oyinkan) walks into the bar] : free newspaper! anybody like some or should I just leave right now?
- gestures from the group ordering newspaper girl to bring the newspaper.
"So I've heard that there's some serious crime going on in this little town.. it scares me. Some human being is going round and-
Conor: -Just give us the papers. *clenches jaw*
[Georgina, Jordan eye each other awkwardly]
- newspaper girl leaves.
- CONOR, GEORGINA, JORDAN READ NEWSPAPER-
C: Wow, so finally something is going on in our little city.
G: I know, rather shocking I must say.
J: *nods head*
C: Um, *looks at watch* well guys, I've got to start heading. Have to meet some business partners.
G: business partners? At 10:30pm? *strange look*
C: What's with the face? Business partners don't have closing times on when they shouldn't talk about business. business is always in my head! Got to start heading *takes the last sip of his glass, taps Jordan* see you guys tomorrow! -walks off and out of the bar-
G: guess i better start going too.. It's getting late and I've got an early start tomorrow.
J: Alright, I'm gonna stay for a few, grab a few numbers off these girls & then I'm gonna leave. Get home safely!
G: -puts jacket on & starts to leave- Will do! You too!
- shot of Conor meeting up with friends by the river. Covering his face & looking around, also carrying a bag with him.
-shot of Gina walking home, strangely enough taking a different route from the usual.
-music playing in the background-
|This script is fairly different from the actual film noir itself, but it still has the same storyline to it, please bear in mind|
FILM NOIR from Conor Thomson on Vimeo.
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